Hello Bill,
The only "glaringly wrong" thing I've noticed on the policy, would be the gallery page – You might want to detail a bit on gallery entries, eg. Can the drawings be anonymous? Do you store something else besides name and drawing? Etc.
You also forgot to mention Facebook (widget at left, on the navigation bar). It seems to store cookies and trackers as well.
You should also inform the country where data is processed, iirc? I remember a lot of problems involving Google and Facebook on that regard. I'm not so up to date as I should be, I guess.
Other than that, I advise giving a quick look at gdpr.eu/checklist , it was very helpful for me, and might be helpful for you as well.
Unrelated: You might want to consider using Let's Encrypt to add HTTPS support to the website as well. Failing that, Cloudflare can also cover the requests if you add a self signed certificate to your Apache installation. Your Apache seems severely outdated and not using mod_security either, the /css/ folder has directory listing, and your website might be vulnerable to XSS attacks. My browser was weeping a bit about that, thought I would let you know.
Lighthouse also complained about unused JavaScript, the language selection not having a label for screenreaders, and lack of DOCTYPE.
TL;DR You might want to revise the whole website if you get time, these problems might really hurt SEO performance and expose the server to attacks – A problem if you happen to have sensitive information on it!
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Jesusalva
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